The biggest change this world needs.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the biggest change this world needs is go back to normal life without the virus. So many things changed because of the virus and it’s really big problem. I know it’s hard to go back but I hope it can be.
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Hi [이름]! I think so too :( I miss traveling ang going outside without the fear of getting the virus. Good thing there\'s a vaccine already. :) Only a few more months and hopefully the world would be a better place again.
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I think the biggest change this world needs is go back to normal life without the virus.
>>I think the biggest change this world needs is to go back to normal life without the virus.
So many things changed because of the virus and it’s really big problem.
>>A lot of things have changed because of the virus and it’s really a big problem.
I know it’s hard to go back but I hope it can be.
>>CORRECT
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