The biggest choice in my life!
학생이 쓴 원문
The biggest choice in my life was coming to my current high school. I alone had to go to the high school I wanted to go to. So I applied to the best school for studying and got accepted. This is the biggest choice of my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Shiela! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The biggest choice in my life was coming to my current high school.
>>> CORRECT!
I alone had to go to the high school I wanted to go to.
>>> CORRECT!
So I applied to the best school for studying and got accepted.
>>> CORRECT!
This is the biggest choice of my life.
>>> CORRECT!
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