The biggest goal in my life.
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The biggest goal in my life is to become always happy.
>> The biggest goal in my life is to always be happy.
I am happy often now, of course, but I want to be always happy.
>> I am often happy now, of course, but I want to always be happy.
In other words, I want to continue to be happy and feel more fully happy.
>> CORRECT
For this, I think that sometimes I should feel accomplishment for my job and I should be satisfied with something small but important everyday.
>> For this, I think that sometimes I should feel accomplished for my job and I should be satisfied with something small but important every day.
So, I set a goal to reach so that I could feel accomplishment.
>> So, I set a goal to reach so that I could feel accomplished.
I will go abroad for my job and enter the best university to get a scholarship which is helpful for my job.
>> CORRECT
And for thanking daily life, I will train myself to think of good thing in my daily life everyday.
>> I am also thankful for my daily life, I will train myself to think of good things in my daily life every day.
I think that these two things make me more happy.
>> CORRECT
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