The biggest problem that I have overcome.
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21 year ago. I joined the military. All of healthy Korean men have to do military service.
After basic military training, I was placed special force. I never want to be placed, but I had no choice.
A life at special force was extreme hard. I had to take special training as like Helicopter rappel(to jump into air from helicopter 10m ~15m high with a rope), special martial arts( kind of Taekwondo). While I was taking the training, I thought that getting hurt as much can\'t walk better than taking the training. So When I ran on a mountain in summer, I thought that hundred times. But I couldn\'t. After putting down all of my mind, I was easy. Those days, I had slept with dreams that it was drinking beer, having a meal my mom served every days.
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The biggest problem that I have overcome.
21 year ago. I joined the military. All of healthy Korean men have to do military service.
>>> 21 years ago I joined the military. All healthy Korean men have to do military service in Korea.
After basic military training, I was placed special force.
>>> After basic military training, I was placed in the special force.
I never want to be placed, but I had no choice.
>>> I never want to be assigned to the special force, but I had no choice.
A life at special force was extreme hard.
>>> Life at the special force was extremely hard.
I had to take special training as like Helicopter rappel(to jump into air from helicopter 10m ~15m high with a rope), special martial arts( kind of Taekwondo).
>>> I had to take special training like Helicopter rappel (to jump into the air from a helicopter which is 10m ~15m high with a rope), especially martial arts which is similar to Taekwondo.
While I was taking the training, I thought that getting hurt as much can\'t walk better than taking the training.
>>> While I was taking the training, I thought that getting hurt to the point that I can\'t walk will be better than taking the rest of the training.
So When I ran on a mountain in summer, I thought that hundred times.
>>> So when I ran on a mountain in summer, I have thought that for hundred times but I couldn\'t.
But I couldn\'t. After putting down all of my mind, I was easy.
>>> After focusing all of my minds, it became easy.
Those days, I had slept with dreams that it was drinking beer, having a meal my mom served every days.
>>> Those days, I had slept with dreams that I was drinking beer or I was having a meal that my mom used to serve every day.
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