The book that I’ll introduce today is ‘The First-time Teacher Doesn’t Cry.’
학생이 쓴 원문
The book that I’ll introduce today is ‘The First-time Teacher Doesn’t Cry.’
It’s a book inspired me, because I want to be an elementary school teacher.
This story is that introduce first-time teacher’s life, and their difficulties and happy occasions.
I’ll remember this story for a long time, and when I became first-time elementary school teacher, I’ll grow further.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
It’s a book inspired me, because I want to be an elementary school teacher.
This story is that introduce first-time teacher’s life, and their difficulties and happy occasions.
I’ll remember this story for a long time, and when I became first-time elementary school teacher, I’ll grow further.
I am not a book lover. haha
Looking at book makes me tired already.
The last book that I have read was fairytales.
Andrea
The book that I’ll introduce today is ‘The First-time Teacher Doesn’t Cry.’
>> Correct
It’s a book inspired me, because I want to be an elementary school teacher.
>> It\'s a book that inspired me because I wanted to be an elementary teacher.
This story is that introduce first-time teacher’s life, and their difficulties and happy occasions.
>> This story introduced a first-time teacher\'s life and her difficulties and happy events.
I’ll remember this story for a long time, and when I became first-time elementary school teacher, I’ll grow further.
>> I\'ll remember this story for a long time and when I become a first-time elementary school teacher, I will grow better.
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