The books or television?
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The good thing about books is that they allow you to use your imagination when you read them and feel good when you turn the pages. The disadvantage is that there are many texts, so it is difficult to read for people with poor concentration, and once damaged, it is difficult to recover. The advantage of a movie is that you can immerse yourself in it because it is a video shot. The downside of the movie is that it has a long story in a short amount of time, which can make you feel bored.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The good thing about books is that they allow you to use your imagination when you read them and feel good when you turn the pages.
>>> CORRECT!
The disadvantage is that there are many texts, so it is difficult to read for people with poor concentration, and once damaged, it is difficult to recover.
>>> CORRECT!
The advantage of a movie is that you can immerse yourself in it because it is a video shot.
>>> CORRECT!
The downside of the movie is that it has a long story in a short amount of time, which can make you feel bored.
>>> CORRECT!
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