the buble economy
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A friend of mine tempted by a real estate agency contracted to buy an apartment which at that time was very popular as investment. The agency assured that they would introduce a good purchaser. However, the inbalance between the demand and supply in construction caused the construction boom to be subsided and an economical crisis. The investors of gorgeous apartments were scrambling to sell them off and the prices went down but few were sold. My friend also faced the same problem and couldn’t afford to keep paying until a purcher would appear, so she decided to give up the apartment. She didn't know how strict the monetary society was. Now, she was required to pay whole the delayed money including the second payment, and those interests of the delayed payments.
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Hi Ms. [Name]!!! So this is the story of your friend, you mentioned it during our class. I am so sorry to hear about your friend뭩 story. It is really a gamble to enter a transaction that you are not sure about the outcome. Nowadays, we really need to be careful with the transactions that we are going to enter. Have a great day!!
Lei J
A friend of mine tempted by a real estate agency contracted to buy an apartment which at that time was very popular as investment.
>>A friend of mine was persuaded by a real state agency contractor to buy an apartment which at that time was very popular form of investment.
The agency assured her/him that they would introduce her/him to a good purchaser.
>>correct
However, the imbalance between the demand and supply in construction caused the construction boom to subside and later caused economical crisis.
>>correct
The investors of gorgeous apartments were scrambling to sell them off and the prices went down but few were sold.
>>correct
My friend also faced the same problem and couldn’t afford to keep paying until a purchaser would appear, so she decided to give up the apartment.
>>correct
She didn't know how strict the monetary society was.
>>correct
Now, she was required to pay the whole payment of the delayed money including the second payment, and those interests of the delayed payments.
>>correct
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