The Bucket List

2015-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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The bucket list is a list which is written I want to do before I die. Today, I want to talk about my bucket list. 1. I want to do backpack trip around the world. 2. I want to meet Oprah Winfrey, but I don't know how I can do:( 3. I want to attend abroad school. 4. I want to establish a education foundation to teach children of Africa. I think I have to study hard for make my bucket list to success.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I hope you can doo all these things for you to have a fulfilled life. You\'re still young, so you have a great chance to make your dreams come true. Take care! T. JanE ^^ The bucket list is a list which is written I want to do before I die.>> A bucket list is a list that contains activities or things that I want to do before I die.  Today, I want to talk about my bucket list.>> Correct 1. I want to do backpack trip around the world.>> I want to go a round the world trip.  2. I want to meet Oprah Winfrey, but I don\'t know how I can do:(>> I want to meet Oprah Winfrey, but I don\'t know how.  3. I want to attend abroad school.>> I want to study abroad.  4. I want to establish a education foundation to teach children of Africa.>> I want to estanlish an education foundation to teach children in Africa. I think I have to study hard for make my bucket list to success. >> I think I have to study hard to make my bucket list come true.   

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