The busiest event in korea
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I think that the busiest event in korea is Seollal. Seollal is the Korea New Year’s day. On that day, the whole family gather and eat tteokguk. Tteokguk is rice cake soup. Eating Tteokguk means to celebrate being a year older. And the adults in the family usually give some money as giving some good advice.
I like Seollal. Because i’ve been receiving some money from adults too. But i get older and earn money now, so i start to feel i have to give money to childern. lol
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I think that the busiest event in korea is Seollal.
>> I think one of the busiest events here in Korea is the Seollal holiday.
Seollal is the Korea New Year’s day.
>> Seollal is like the Korea\'s New Year.
On that day, the whole family gather and eat tteokguk. Tteokguk is rice cake soup.
>> On that day, the whole family gathers and eats some tteokguk which is a rice cake soup.
Eating Tteokguk means to celebrate being a year older. And the adults in the family usually give some money as giving some good advice.
>> Eating Tteokguk means you are celebrating another year and the adults in the family usually give some money and some good advice.
I like Seollal. Because i’ve been receiving some money from adults too.
>> I really like Seollal because I can receive money from the adults in my family.
But i get older and earn money now, so i start to feel i have to give money to childern. lol
>> But as I get older, I guess it\'s now my turn to give money to the children in our family.
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