The busy person.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am not a busy person. I want to change the sentence that I\'m a diligent person. even though I will die tomorrow.I will not regret.
It is my wish.
I am trying to do something and doing something is my pleasure. I would like to say it
I\'m saving my ime.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]ny!
I like your expression today. Being busy does not mean you have accomplished every thing you want.
enjoy every moment of life and always find happiness :)
Have a great day!
Have a great day!
Aki~
I am not a busy person. I want to change the sentence that I\'m a diligent person. even though I will die tomorrow. I will not regret.
>>> I am not a busy person. I want to change the sentence that I\'m a diligent person. even though I will die tomorrow. I will not regret it.
OR >>> I want to rephrase the word busy to diligent because that\'s who I am and I won\'t regret it even if I die tomorrow.
It is my wish.
>> CORRECT!
I am trying to do something and doing something is my pleasure. I would like to say it
>> CORRECT!
I\'m saving my time.
>> CORRECT!
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