the central library
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The central library in my university started to restructure last Monday.
We can’t borrow and read books anymore until its end.
In each building, there are small spaces where we can study.
However, it is too small for all students in my university to study.
We can’t understand why authority didn’t start it last winter vacation but this semester.
Although we paid the great amount of tuitions to the university, we can’t use the library in this semester.
Many students have complained about it but it is useless.
Today, I had to wait for a long time to get a seat to study.
Besides, restroom was very dirty because of cleaner’s strike.
I was also angry with this. Where my tuition has gone? T_T
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Hello [이름]!
I understand that English could be really difficult...
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfcet it..
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great...^_^
Xoxo,
T.Faye
Here are my corrections for you:
The central library in my university started to restructure last Monday.
>>The reconstruction of the university central library started last Monday.We can’t borrow and read books anymore until its end.
>>We can't borrow and read books anymore until it is finish.In each building, there are small spaces where we can study.
>>CORRECTHowever, it is too small for all students in my university to study.
>>However, the spaces are too small for all university students to study.We can’t understand why authority didn’t start it last winter vacation but this semester.
>>CORRECT Although we paid the great amount of tuitions to the university, we can’t use the library in this semester.
>>Although we paid the required amount for tuition and other fees, we can't use th library this semester.Many students have complained about it but it is useless.
>>CORRECTToday, I had to wait for a long time to get a seat to study.
>>Today, I had to wait for a long time to get a seat for study.Besides, restroom was very dirty because of cleaner’s strike.
>>Besides the library issue, the restroom is also very dirty because the janitor is on strike. I was also angry with this. Where my tuition has gone? T_T
>>I am also angry/upset about theses problems. Where have my tuition and other fees gone?
>>You did great in your sentence constructions. Keep it up!
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