The character
학생이 쓴 원문
I think a person’s character doesn’t change easily.
Especially the cold hearted person’s life is getting bad,
Such as they are broke or they can’t adopt sociality.
They will be worse than before.
So they need to meet kind person..
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday!
First off, thank you for the effort of doing your homework every day.
For this, you mentioned that a person\'s character does not change easily and I totally agree. It takes a process for a person to change his character. Thankfully, there are people that influence them for this change.
I guess we can be an instrument for that change. Hwaiting!
Aki~
I think a person’s character doesn’t change easily.
>>> CORRECT!
Especially the cold-hearted person’s life is getting bad,
>>> Especially a cold-hearted person’s life is getting worse.
Such as they are broke or they can’t adopt sociality.
>>> CORRECT!
They will be worse than before.
>>> CORRECT!
So they need to meet kind person..
>>> So they need to meet kind people.
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