The characteristics I want in my friends.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
First, I have to admit that I do not have many friends.
>>> CORRECT
However, I do not regret not having made a lot of friends because the friends around me now are very precisous to me.
>>> However, I do not regret not having a lot of friends because the friends around me now are very precious to me.
Some have been friends since middle shchool, others have been since high school.
>>>Some have been my friends since middle school, others since high school.
Even I and my friends do not have much in common, we have built our friendship up firmly.
>>> CORRECT
I think one of the reasons I have still contcted with them is their relability.
>>> I think one of the reasons I have still contacted them is their sense of reliability.
Friends ,at least on my dictionary, are the ones you can depend on and you can talk anything with, without fear of being judged.
>>> Friends ,at least on my dictionary, are the ones you can depend on and you can talk anything with, without the fear of being judged.
To be friends each other, it is important for both sides to talk honestly with sincere hearts and to keep friends\\\' secrets.
>>> To be friends with each other, it is important for both sides to talk honestly with sincere hearts and keep friends\\\' secrets.
That is why I put much emphasis on reliability my friends have.
>>> CORRECT
With our friendship doing so, I would have more happier life with them in trust.
>>>With our friendship doing so, I would have happier life with them in trust.
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