The child I met in train had special ski tool.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Why are you talking with these people?
2. I can't see why this_ is so important.
3. He told me that there were many students here.
4. this isn't much we can do right now.
5. this isn't the right answer.
6. I don't know why these children are laughing.
7. Is there anything I can do to help?
8. Is there your husband?
9. Are there many types of animals in this forest?
10. these things happen.
11.1.2
The child I met in train had special ski tool.
It seemed like a bike. but It had no tire, but It had ski blade.
On the road to the top, I met some koreans there.
One couple and one girl were going trip to swiss too!
the most important thing was the girl we met was very pretty.
I thought she was celebrity who showed on tv programs.
we took some photos with them. finally we reached to the top.
the view was beautiful.
we came to the room. we enjoyed a party with roomates.
we drank beer and talked to each other like as we were a friend.
we slept for next day.
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
I know that it is a challenge to learn English but I know you are determined to learn new things.
Determination and perseverance move the world; thinking that others will do it for you is a sure way to fail. Determination is one of the key factors of improving your ability to speak and understand a conversation. In spite of difficulties, it could help you know your strengths and weaknesses.
T. Nina^^
1. Why are you talking with these people?
>> correct
2. I can\'t see why this_ is so important.
>> correct
3. He told me that there were many students here.
>> correct
4. this isn\'t much we can do right now.
>> There
5. this isn\'t the right answer.
>> This ( capitalize)
6. I don\'t know why these children are laughing.
>> correct
7. Is there anything I can do to help?
>> correct
8. Is there your husband?
>> this
9. Are there many types of animals in this forest?
>> correct
10. these things happen.
>> These ( capitalize)
11.1.2
The child I met in train had special ski tool.
>> The child that I met on the train had a special skiing tool.
It seemed like a bike.
>> It seems like a bike.
but It had no tire, but It had ski blade.
>> It has no tires, but it has blades.
On the road to the top, I met some koreans there.
>> On top of the road, I met Koreans.
One couple and one girl were going trip to swiss too!
>> A couple and a girl were going on a trip in Swiss too.
the most important thing was the girl we met was very pretty.
>> The most important thing was that the girl that I met was very pretty.
I thought she was celebrity who showed on tv programs.
>> I thought she was a celebrity shown on TV.
we took some photos with them.
>> Correct [capitalization]
finally we reached to the top.
>> Finally, we reached the top.
the view was beautiful.
>> The view was beautiful.
we came to the room. we enjoyed a party with roomates.
>> We arrived in the room, and had a party with my roommates.
we drank beer and talked to each other like as we were a friend.
>> We drank beer and had conversations like we\'ve known each other for a long time.
we slept for next day.
>> We slept for the next day.^^
>> OR: We slept to have enough energy for the next day.
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