The chores I like at home
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you like to do your chores at home? Most people don\'t like it, but some people like it. I like to do it, too. It is my house work. I like it all but I love these three things. It is cleaning my room, set the table and folding laundry.
First, I love cleaning my room because when I clean it , it looks beautiful and my mom likes it, too. For example, I make my bed, put my books on the desk properly, put away the trash on my floor and put my clothes in the closet. Cleaning my room tidy is hobby and my chores.
Second, I like to set table tidy so that me and my family can eat food well. First, I clean the table with a tissue when Iam done cleaning the table then I put some spoons and chopsticks to my family. Last I put dish on the table. My mom and I put food on the dish and we are done.
Third, I always volunteer when my mom asked someone in my family to fold all the clothes she did laundry. I think I always have to fold clothes because it is fun to me.
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>> CORRECT
Most people don\'t like it, but some people like it.
>> CORRECT
I like to do it, too.
>>CORRECT
It is my house work.
>> CORRECT
I like it all but I love these three things.
>> I like doing it all but I love doing these three things more.
It is cleaning my room, set the table and folding laundry.
>> It is cleaning my room, setting the table, and folding the laundry.
>> CORRECT
For example, I make my bed, put my books on the desk properly, put away the trash on my floor and put my clothes in the closet.
>> CORRECT
Cleaning my room tidy is hobby and my chores.
>> Cleaning my room and making it tidy is my hobby and chore.
>>Second, I like to set a tidy table so that my family and I can eat food well.
First, I clean the table with a tissue when Iam done cleaning the table then I put some spoons and chopsticks to my family.
>>The first thing I do is clean the table with a tissue and when I am done, I put some spoons and chopsticks for my family.
Last I put dish on the table.
>>Lastly, I put dishes on the table.
My mom and I put food on the dish and we are done.
>>My mom and I put food on the dishes and we are done.
>>The last thing I like doing is that I always volunteer when my mom asks someone in my family to fold all the clothes after she does the laundry.
I think I always have to fold clothes because it is fun to me.
>>I think that I always have to fold the clothes because I find it fun.
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