The Christmas spirit
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I think the Christmas spirit is to wait for Christmas Day, plan what to do on Christmas Day, and get ready to keep excited. Making a Christmas tree in the house, lighting up lights, listening to carols.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I think the Christmas spirit is to wait for Christmas Day, plan what to do on Christmas Day, and get ready to keep excited.
>>> CORRECT!
Making a Christmas tree in the house, lighting up lights, listening to carols.
>>> Making a Christmas tree in the house, lighting up lights, and listening to carols.
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