The closest person I respect is my family.

Hi Da [이름], 

It\'s wonderful to hear that your family is the closest and most respected group of people in your life. Their positive influence and values have clearly shaped your perspective on what it means to be a good person. Keep cherishing and learning from those around you who inspire you to be better. 

~Teacher Cathy 

The people I respect are human beings with the right personality. 

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OR>>The people I respect are those with the right personality. 

Some people saw it in the cover letter, some people saw it on the street, some people saw it in the video. 

>>Some people saw it in the cover letter, some people saw it on the street, and some people saw it in the video 

Everyone in the world has something to learn, but the difference with respectable people is that I feel like I want to grow older and change like them. 

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OR>>Everyone in the world has something to learn, but the difference with respectable people is that I feel inspired to grow and change like them. 

So the people that I respect are people who try and have a good heart for society, which is ordinary but you can see everywhere and at any time. 

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OR>>So the people I respect are those who try to better society and have good hearts, which might seem ordinary but are visible everywhere and at any time.