The coldest weather.

2011-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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As I told you, I have been in Seoul for a party. But I almost froze for it's minus 17 degrees. Oh my~~ Are you imagine? I felt like my skin being torn. Anyway~ I really enjoyed the party and the musical 'Legally Blonde' although it's too cold. I like a musical which have many beautiful songs better than a play. I didn't expect that musical because I watched a movie 'Legally Blonde' before. But there are many difference between a movie and a musical. I was fascinated by dinamic performance. I want to feel its impression toghether with my boyfreind too. If you have a chance, why don't you watch the 'Legally Blonde'?

강사 첨삭

Hi J!! Thanks for recommending the movie. Actually I watched both of the sequels already. It’s fun plus the fact that I like Reese Witherspoon. ^^ Don’t forget to crink your coat dear okay. And take care. Lei J   As I told you, I have been in Seoul for a party. >>correct But I almost froze for it's minus 17 degrees. >>correct >>But I almost froze because the temperature was negative 17 degrees.  Oh my~~ >>correct Are you imagine? >>Can you imagine that? I felt like my skin being torn. >>I felt like my skin was being torn. Anyway~ I really enjoyed the party and the musical 'Legally Blonde' although it's too cold. >>correct I like a musical which have many beautiful songs better than a play. >>I like watching a musical that includes beautiful songs better than a play. I didn't expect that to be a musical because I watched a movie 'Legally Blonde' before. >>correct But there are many difference between a movie and a musical. >>But there are lots of difference between the movie and  the musical. I was fascinated by the dynamic performance. >>correct I want to feel its impression together with my boyfreind too. >>correct If you have a chance, why don't you watch the 'Legally Blonde'? >>correct

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