The coldest weather.
학생이 쓴 원문
As I told you, I have been in Seoul for a party.
But I almost froze for it's minus 17 degrees.
Oh my~~
Are you imagine?
I felt like my skin being torn.
Anyway~ I really enjoyed the party and the musical 'Legally Blonde'
although it's too cold.
I like a musical which have many beautiful songs better than a play.
I didn't expect that musical because I watched a movie 'Legally
Blonde' before.
But there are many difference between a movie and a musical.
I was fascinated by dinamic performance.
I want to feel its impression toghether with my boyfreind too.
If you have a chance, why don't you watch the 'Legally Blonde'?
강사 첨삭
Hi J!! Thanks for recommending the movie. Actually I watched both of the sequels already. It’s fun plus the fact that I like Reese Witherspoon. ^^ Don’t forget to crink your coat dear okay. And take care.
Lei J
As I told you, I have been in Seoul for a party.
>>correct
But I almost froze for it's minus 17 degrees.
>>correct
>>But I almost froze because the temperature was negative 17 degrees.
Oh my~~
>>correct
Are you imagine?
>>Can you imagine that?
I felt like my skin being torn.
>>I felt like my skin was being torn.
Anyway~ I really enjoyed the party and the musical 'Legally Blonde' although it's too cold.
>>correct
I like a musical which have many beautiful songs better than a play.
>>I like watching a musical that includes beautiful songs better than a play.
I didn't expect that to be a musical because I watched a movie 'Legally Blonde' before.
>>correct
But there are many difference between a movie and a musical.
>>But there are lots of difference between the movie and the musical.
I was fascinated by the dynamic performance.
>>correct
I want to feel its impression together with my boyfreind too.
>>correct
If you have a chance, why don't you watch the 'Legally Blonde'?
>>correct
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