The complicated I hear the most
학생이 쓴 원문
The compliment I receive most often is “You are kind.”
My friends say that I always listen to them and try to help.
I feel happy when they say that, because I want to make people smile.
Being kind is important to me, so I try to keep it that way.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny!
This was such a lovely and heartwarming piece. I can really feel your sincerity through your words. You have such a gentle and kind personality, and it truly shows in how you express yourself. It’s wonderful that you take pride in being kind and making others smile, those are rare and beautiful qualities. You wrote with warmth and clarity, and I can tell how thoughtful you are. Indeed, you’re a really nice girl, and your positive energy shines through every sentence. Keep being the sweet, kind-hearted person you are, Jenny. You’re doing amazing!
~Teacher Cathy
The complicated I hear the most
>>The compliment I hear the most.
The compliment I receive most often is “You are kind.”
>>CORRECT
OR>>The compliment I get most often is “You’re very kind.\"
My friends say that I always listen to them and try to help.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My friends say that I always listen to them carefully and try my best to help.
I feel happy when they say that, because I want to make people smile.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I feel happy when they say that because I truly want to make others smile.
Being kind is important to me, so I try to keep it that way.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Being kind is very important to me, so I always try to stay that way.
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