The concerns when i buy a car.

2023-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Quenny

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It is easy to buy a car because you can use your credit card with a 12- month interest-free installment plan. However, when you buy a car you should concern even more than 1 thing. First of all, you should check it is safety or not. If it is too small it can be fragile when you get a car accident. Second, The options, for example the oil fee and insurance fee and so on. You also have to consider how much these will cost during having the car. Therefore, you can choose which one is suit for you buying a new car or used one. Buying a new car is definitely expensive than used one but clean and having a better performance. While the used one is cheaper than the new one but it can be easy to break-down. Also, later you may pay more fee to fix your used car or not.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ellen, 
When buying a new car, there are many factors to consider. The car needs to fulfill your wants, needs, and lifestyle demands. Also, you’ll want to consider the resale value, costs of ownership, desired features, incentive and trade-in options, and pricing and financing. Make sure you get the best value for your money.
 New cars come with the latest safety features and are very likely to be reliable, though they can come with a higher price tag and higher insurance costs. Used cars are generally cheaper because the high depreciation of their early years is already behind them and you may not need as much insurance coverage. And one of the most significant advantages of buying a new car is that new cars come with a warranty and not all used vehicles do. But the price of a new car is typically much more expensive than if you bought a vehicle used. Teacher QUENNY
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It is easy to buy a car because you can use your credit card with a 12- month interest-free installment plan. However, when you buy a car you should concern even more than 1 thing.
First of all, you should check it is safety or not. If it is too small it can be fragile when you get a car accident.
>> It is easy to buy a car because you can use your credit card with a 12-month interest-free installment plan. However, when you buy a car you should concern about even more than 1 thing. First of all, you should check whether it is safe or not, and if it is too small it can be fragile when you get into a car accident.

Second, The options, for example the oil fee and insurance fee and so on. You also have to consider how much these will cost during having the car. Therefore, you can choose which one is suit for you buying a new car or used one. Buying a new car is definitely expensive than used one but clean and having a better performance. While the used one is cheaper than the new one but it can be easy to break-down. Also, later you may pay more fee to fix your used car or not.
>> Second, The options, for example, the oil consumption and insurance fee, and so on. You also have to consider how much these will cost during having the car. Therefore, you can choose which one suits you whether buying a new car or a used car.  Buying a new car is definitely more expensive compared to a used car. But a new car is clean and has better performance. While the used car is cheaper compared to the new car but it can be easy to break down. Also, later you may pay more fees to fix your used car or not.



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It is easy to buy a car because you can use your credit card with a 12- month interest-free installment plan.
However, when you buy a car you should concern even more than 1 thing.
First of all, you should check it is safety or not. If it is too small it can be fragile when you get a car accident.
Second, The options, for example the oil fee and insurance fee and so on. You also have to consider how much these will cost during having the car.
Therefore, you can choose which one is suit for you buying a new car or used one.
Buying a new car is definitely expensive than used one but clean and having a better performance.
While the used one is cheaper than the new one but it can be easy to break-down.
Also, later you may pay more fee to fix your used car or not.

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