The conduct of Japan
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if Japan joined the treaty, the country should obey the law. If the member country breached the treaty, the country will be subject to sanctions. but Japan is exceptional. Because Japan paid a lot of money to the IAEA which is international organization in case of this. So affected countries such as Korea and Philippines have to be prepared in advance about the conduct of Japan.
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If Japan joined the treaty, the country should obey the law. >> If Japan will join the treaty, that country should obey the law.
If the member country breached the treaty, the country will be subject to sanctions. but Japan is exceptional.
>> If the member country breached the treaty, the country will be subjected to sanctions. but Japan is exempted.
Because Japan paid a lot of money to the IAEA which is international organization in case of this.
>>CORRECT!
OR >> Because Japan paid a huge amount of money to the IAEA which is international organization.
So affected countries such as Korea and Philippines have to be prepared in advance about the conduct of Japan.
>>CORRECT!
OR >> affected countries like Korea and the Philippines have to be prepared in advance about the conduct of Japan.
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