The country I want to visit
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to travel the countries that have a lot of historical remains and monuments. My husband and I have much interest in history or anthropology. We like to visit historic places such as ancient palaces, castles, old temples, or some remains. So I want to travel Greece or Egypt someday ~
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for completing your homework.
That\'s interesting. I enjoy going to historical museums too. :D
Anyway, see you next week! Enjoy your weekend~
-T.Jhozel
I like to travel the countries that have a lot of historical remains and monuments.
>> Correct!
OR: I enjoy visiting countries with a lot of historical relics and monuments.
OR: I enjoy visiting countries with a lot of historical relics and monuments.
My husband and I have much interest in history or anthropology.
>> My husband and I are both fascinated by history and anthropology.
We like to visit historic places such as ancient palaces, castles, old temples, or some remains.
>> My husband and I are both fascinated by history and anthropology.
So I want to travel Greece or Egypt someday ~
>> So someday I\'d like to visit Greece or Egypt.
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