The country mouse and the city mouse.
학생이 쓴 원문
Once upon a time, there were two mouses lived their own place. One was a country and the other was a city.
One day city mouse invited the country mouse. He wrote the letter. “I really like living in the city,also I eat as much as I can”. The country mouse left home.When he arrived the city.He was shocked because, there were many cars,big buildings, people walked fast back and forth. He met the city mouse,he introduced his place.he has nice furnitures,unique clothes, also place was so cleaned. He was envy city mouse. City mouse showed the restaurant.
There have many food as soon as he saw he wanted to eat,by that time big cat appeared .He got very sharp toe nails.two cats ran away . The country mouse afraid then was not comfortable at it all. He got home. Finally he was happily ever after.I got lesson from this story,that materialistic was not first choice ,if I have peace, and freedom, that way I am happy and I can enjoying my life.
My house located at the corner from the gate.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]nah! If you don\'t have enough space for the prepositions, it\'s okay if you don\'t include it. I can just resend it for the next class homework ^^
- Teacher Debbie
>> Once upon a time, there were two mice who lived in their own places.
One was a country and the other was a city.
>> One came from the country while the other was from the city.
One day city mouse invited the country mouse.
One day city mouse invited the country mouse.
>> One day, city mouse invited the country mouse.
He wrote the letter.
>> correct
“I really like living in the city,also I eat as much as I can”.
>> correct
The country mouse left home.
>> correct
When he arrived the city.
>> correct
He was shocked because, there were many cars,big buildings, people walked fast back and forth.
>> He was shocked because there were a lot of cars, big buildings, and people walked fast back and forth.
He met the city mouse,he introduced his place.
>> He met the city mouse and got introduced to his place.
he has nice furnitures,unique clothes, also place was so cleaned.
>> He has nice furniture, unique clothes and a really neat space.
He was envy city mouse.
>> He got envious of the city mouse.
City mouse showed the restaurant.
>> City mouse showed him to the restaurant.
There have many food as soon as he saw he wanted to eat,by that time big cat appeared .
There have many food as soon as he saw he wanted to eat,by that time big cat appeared .
>> As soon as he saw all the food, he instantly got hungry.
>> But a big cat suddenly appeared.
He got very sharp toe nails.
>> correct
two cats ran away .
>> The two mice ran away from the cat.
The country mouse afraid then was not comfortable at it all.
>> The country mouse got afraid and wasn\'t comfortable with the environment.
He got home.
>> So, he went home to the countryside.
Finally he was happily ever after.
>> Finally, he became happy.
I got lesson from this story,that materialistic was not first choice ,if I have peace, and freedom, that way I am happy and I can enjoying my life.
>> The lesson I got from this story is being materialistic shouldn\'t be a priority.
>> The lesson I got from this story is being materialistic shouldn\'t be a priority.
>> If you have peace and freedom, you can fully enjoy your life.
My house located at the corner from the gate.
My house located at the corner from the gate.
>> My house is located at the corner of the gate.
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