The country that I would like to born in if I could
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If I could be born in abother country, I would like to born in America. After I watched kissing booth I really want to go to school in America. One of my cousin is staying at America so when I hear some stroy about there I regret that I didn’t go to America. So I want to born in America.
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Hi [이름]! The American life is good indeed. Don\'t worry, it\'s still not too late. Maybe you can migrate to America someday, right? You may never know. :)
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>>If I could be born in another country, I would like to born in America.
After I watched kissing booth I really want to go to school in America.
>>>After watching the series called \"Kissing booth\", it made me want to go to an American school.
One of my cousin is staying at America so when I hear some stroy about there I regret that I didn’t go to America.
>>One of my cousins is staying in America so when I hear some stories about her stay there, I regret not going to America before.
So I want to born in America.
>>CORRECT
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