THE COW AND BOTTLE -2-
학생이 쓴 원문
"How Can I drink waters in the bottle ? " he was thinking it long time. Finally , he had a good idea and filed away so far.
After some time went, cow got back with small rock and insert it into the bottle. Repeatly, cow filled it up in the bottle, so that the water was as level up as rock's volume.
Eventually cow could drink water in the bottle.
He could feel more fresh because of gains made a effort continuously.
강사 첨삭
Hello TS! Thank you for sharing me this kind of story. I am impressed because you can really make a composition like this. I appreciate it very much. This is really a great work of you! Very good! Keep it up! Anyway, I will talk to you later.
-Teacher Chloe
"How Can I drink waters in the bottle ? " he was thinking it long time. Finally , he had a good idea and filed away so far.
>>"How can I drink water in the bottle? ". He was thinking it in a long time. Finally, he had a good idea and flied away so far.
After some time went, cow got back with small rock and insert it into the bottle.
>> After some time of going around, cow got back with small rock and insert it into the bottle.
Repeatly, cow filled it up in the bottle, so that the water was as level up as rock's volume.
>> Repeatedly, cow filled it up in the bottle so that the water would as level up as rock's volume.
Eventually cow could drink water in the bottle.
>> Eventually, the cow could drink water in the bottle.
He could feel more fresh because of gains made a effort continuously.
>> He could feel more fresh because of gains made an effort continuously.
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