The craze for audition programs - 2 -

2011-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Actually "I Am a Singer" is not an audition program. The contestants are all professional singers. They have one thing in common. They are highly qualified but not appropriately estimated to the public. They show us their fantastic songs with new arrangement. We come to realize that there are no limit when it comes to the art. We can tell that they do their best and we enjoy our privilege by watching the show. They seem to be satisfied and flattered because many audiences and viewers highly concentrate on their performances.

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Oh, now I understand the purpose and meaning of that program, [이름]. Wow, it뭩 quite different from here, I suppose we haven't really talked about ranking our popular artists here, but that would be fun and would ignite the curiosity of the audience too! See you in class again [이름]. - T.Ali  - Actually "I Am a Singer" is not an audition program. >>> Correct The contestants are all professional singers. >>> Correct They have one thing in common. >>> Correct They are highly qualified but not appropriately estimated to the public. >>> Correct >>>OR: They are highly- qualified but they are not ranked according to the popularity with the public. They show us their fantastic songs with new arrangement. >>> Correct We come to realize that there are no limit when it comes to the art. >>> We come to realize that there are no limits when it comes the arts. We can tell that they do their best and we enjoy our privilege by watching the show. >>> Correct They seem to be satisfied and flattered because many audiences and viewers highly concentrate on their performances. >>> Correct

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