The craziest change in appearance.
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I usually keep my appearance because I don\'t want to take a risk.
>> I don\'t usually make changes in my appearance because I\'m not really into taking risks.
However, last year, I had short cut for the first time.
>> However, last year, I tried cutting my hair short for the first time.
At that time, I started full-time study.
>> At that time, I started studying full-time.
So, I wanted to reduce the time to prepare.
>> So, I wanted to reduce the time of fixing myself up every day.
Someday, I will have short cut again, and I will cut shorter than before I had.
>> One day, I will cut my hair short again and it might even be shorter than ever.
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