The day after tomorrow........

The day after tomorrow is children day. So my brother and I want to buy Wii CDs. My brother is Mario power soccer. And I'm is Just dance 2 or 3. But I cna't buy Just dance 3 in the Makret ot toystore. Because they aare not comes from Korea. SO We can buy the internet. It will be more expensive than real Just dance 3 cost. Anyway. Today is my school An intranural sthletic meet. I'm very happy. Our blue team will be win this time. Becasue yesterday we had a prectice. And tup-of-war and realy. We are win all of the games. I'm very exciting now!

Hello Justin! Thanks for sharing this wonderful composition. ^^ I checked your sentences, please review them. Good luck with the intramurals today! I hope your team wins! FIGHTING! :D Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ The day after tomorrow is children day. >> The day after tomorrow is Children\'s Day.So my brother and I want to buy Wii CDs. >> CORRECT OR >> So my brother and I want to buy some Wii CDs. My brother is Mario power soccer.>> My brother wants to buy Mario Power Soccer.And I\'m is Just dance 2 or 3. >> I want to buy Just Dance 2 or 3.But I cna\'t buy Just dance 3 in the Makret ot toystore. >> But I can\'t buy Just Dance 3 in the Market or the Toy Store.Because they aare not comes from Korea. >> Because it is not yet available in Korea.SO We can buy the internet. >> So we can only buy it from the Internet.It will be more expensive than real Just dance 3 cost. >> It will be more expensive than the original price of Just Dance 3.Anyway. >> CORRECTToday is my school An intranural sthletic meet.>> Today is my school\'s annual intramural athletic meet.I\'m very happy. >> CORRECTOur blue team will be win this time. >> I am on the blue team and we will win this time.Becasue yesterday we had a prectice. >> We practice yesterday.And tup-of-war and realy. >> We played tug-of-war and relay race.We are win all of the games. >> We will win all the games.I\'m very exciting now! >> I\'m very excited now! Or >> I\'m feeling so excited right now.