The development
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I don\'t know exactly how this area bound to green belt has developed. I have heard that when the local government removed some bans on green belt areas, it seemed to allow development that protects the nature of this area as much as possible. It also developed several green walking trails to the lake or mountains, so the residents or visitors can enjoy the nature without any damage.
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Hello, GI [이름]!
It\'s nice that despite the lifting of restrictions and development in that area, as you said, they were still able to maintain the natural environment there. Just a minor correction on your homework: we use \'or\' when suggesting a choice, so I think if we are talking about both, using \'and\' would be better.
- T. Caitlyn
I don\'t know exactly how this area bound to green belt has developed.
>> I don\'t know exactly how this area, which is part of the green belt, has developed.
I have heard that when the local government removed some bans on green belt areas, it seemed to allow development that protects the nature of this area as much as possible.
>> I have heard that when the local government removed some restrictions on green belt areas, it seemed to allow development that protects the natural environment of this area as much as possible.
It also developed several green walking trails to the lake or mountains, so the residents or visitors can enjoy the nature without any damage.
>> They also developed several green walking trails to the lake and mountains, so residents and visitors can enjoy nature without causing any damage.
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