The dialogues of life styles

2014-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Today's dialogues is a conversation between men and woman. Men seems to be into woman and he is trying to attract woman's attention. He suggest going out on a date to her. When she was asked to go to dancing and watching movie, she shows indifference to his efforts to get attention from her. Then, he can succeed to get her attention after finding common interest, music. If he didn't talk about music he wouldn't go on a date with her. And he should have known what she really into something before asking her on a date. I'm sure that he have to practice saxophone hard.

강사 첨삭

Great Wednesday morning Mr. [Name]!

Long time no see! kkk

I mean it ahs been a long time that I have read a composition for you.
But nonetheless, I am glad to read  your composition.
And thanks for sharing your thoughts with regards to our topic this morning.
I appreciate that.
Anyway, may you have a blessed and fulfilling day.
See you tomorrow!

Always,
Kathrine ^^


Today\'s dialogues is a conversation between men and woman.

>> Today\'s dialogue is a conversation between a man and a woman.

Men seems to be into woman and he is trying to attract woman\'s attention.

>> The man seems to be into the woman and he is trying to attract the woman\'s attention.
 He suggest going out on a date to her.

>> He asked her to go out on a date with him.
 When she was asked to go to dancing and watching movie, she shows indifference to his efforts to get attention from her.

>>  When she was asked to go dancing and watching a movie, she showed an indifference on his efforts to get her attention.
 Then, he can succeed to get her attention after finding common interest, music.

>> Then he succeeded in getting her attention after finding out their common interest in music.
 If he didn\'t talk about music he wouldn\'t go on a date with her.

>> correct!
 And he should have known what she really into something before asking her on a date.

>> And he should have known what she\'s really into before asking her a date.
 I\'m sure that he have to practice saxophone hard.

>> I\'m sure that he has to practice saxophone hard.

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