The dialogues of life styles
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great Wednesday morning Mr. [Name]!
Long time no see! kkk
I mean it ahs been a long time that I have read a composition for you.
But nonetheless, I am glad to read your composition.
And thanks for sharing your thoughts with regards to our topic this morning.
I appreciate that.
Anyway, may you have a blessed and fulfilling day.
See you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Today\'s dialogues is a conversation between men and woman.
>> Today\'s dialogue is a conversation between a man and a woman.
Men seems to be into woman and he is trying to attract woman\'s attention.
>> The man seems to be into the woman and he is trying to attract the woman\'s attention.
He suggest going out on a date to her.
>> He asked her to go out on a date with him.
When she was asked to go to dancing and watching movie, she shows indifference to his efforts to get attention from her.
>> When she was asked to go dancing and watching a movie, she showed an indifference on his efforts to get her attention.
Then, he can succeed to get her attention after finding common interest, music.
>> Then he succeeded in getting her attention after finding out their common interest in music.
If he didn\'t talk about music he wouldn\'t go on a date with her.
>> correct!
And he should have known what she really into something before asking her on a date.
>> And he should have known what she\'s really into before asking her a date.
I\'m sure that he have to practice saxophone hard.
>> I\'m sure that he has to practice saxophone hard.
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