the differance is

2014-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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the differance between love and being in love is simple. I think love is currently appearing in one's mind. It may occurred from past but it still have an effect to now. of course this is the fundamental belief that the member of couple knows their feeling toward their partner. however being in love is the step of starting of love. being in love is actually simmilar with the starting step of one way love. It might be developed but It is firm that the status of love is initial. It is just my thought.

강사 첨삭

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Hello!!

Oh, I love your ideas!  This is a topic prone to debate and a lot of thoughts.

I appreciate that you took time to compose your thoughts beautifully.

I agree with your statement that \"it may have happened in the past but it still affects the present\".

No matter how hard ex-lovers try to forget, their past leaves a mark that has a huge effect not just in the present but also in the future.

Great job with the sentence construction!

Just don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of each first word.

Also, check the spelling of \'difference\'.

Anyhow, I love the ideas you shared and I hope you can keep enhancing your English skills.

See you in class!

T. Nina^^


the differance between love and being in love is simple.

>> CORRECT [difference]

OR >> The difference between love and being in love is not complicated.

I think love is currently appearing in one\'s mind.

>> CORRECT
It may occurred from past but it still have an effect to now.

>> It may have occurred in the past but it still has an effect to the present.

OR >> The relationship may have happened in the past but it still affects the present time.
of course this is the fundamental belief that the member of couple knows their feeling toward their partner.

>> It is a fundamental belief, of course, that the couple should be aware of their feelings toward each other.
however being in love is the step of starting of love.

>> However, being in love is the first step towards genuine love.
being in love is actually simmilar with the starting step of one way love.

>> Being in love is actually similar to the beginning of a one-way love.
It might be developed but It is firm that the status of love is initial.
>> It might be developed but it is undeniable that the current status of love is the foremost stage of true love.

It is just my thought.

>> It is just my opinion.

OR >> This is my opinion.^^

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