The difference between summer and autumn
학생이 쓴 원문
When I think of summer, I can come to mind hot weather, summer beaches, watermelons, summer flowers, camping, vacation, showers and thunder, cicadas sound and others.
Think of autumn!
There are various kinds of fruits; apple, grape, persimmon, flowers and insects.
The weather is so cool that it is perfect for the picnic.
Also, autumn is the season of harvest.
Therefore, the difference between the two seasons is different in many ways.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
When I think of summer, I can come to mind hot weather, summer beaches, watermelons, summer flowers, camping, vacation, showers and thunder, cicadas sound and others.
>> When I think of summer, hot weather, summer beaches, watermelons, summer flowers, camping, vacation, showers and thunder, cicadas sound and others come to mind.
Think of autumn!
Think of autumn!
>> Correct
There are various kinds of fruits; apple, grape, persimmon, flowers and insects.
There are various kinds of fruits; apple, grape, persimmon, flowers and insects.
>> Correct
The weather is so cool that it is perfect for the picnic.
The weather is so cool that it is perfect for the picnic.
>> The weather is so cool that it is perfect for picnics.
Also, autumn is the season of harvest.
Also, autumn is the season of harvest.
>> Correct
Therefore, the difference between the two seasons is different in many ways.
Therefore, the difference between the two seasons is different in many ways.
>> Therefore, the two seasons can be different in many ways.
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