The difficult decision
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I can't decide wheather I'am on a date or not during preparing the test.One friend said it's good for you to have someone who can stress out and support you all the time but the other friend said it's so dangerous because if you are falling in love,it's very like a strong addiction so you can't concentrate on study.I actually agree the latter but nowadays I'm getting lonely and want to make a boyfriend and spend to happy 2010.I want to enjoy a sweet date.However,I can't do that easily because the test is coming fast and my parents are really expecting that day and I don't want to dissapoint them.I also want to receive praises from people.To be honest,I'm always ready for falling in love but the most important thing is I can't find someone who really like me.Oh~it's the gloomy day.
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I can't decide wheather I'am on a date or not during preparing the test.
>> I can’t decide whether to go on a date or not while I am preparing for an upcoming test.
One friend said it's good for you to have someone who can stress out and support you all the time but the other friend said it's so dangerous because if you are falling in love,it's very like a strong addiction so you can't concentrate on study.
>>One of my friends told me that it’s good to have someone I can vent my stress out and support me all the time. On the other hand, one friend told me that it is very dangerous to fall in love because it’s like an addiction and I won’t be able to concentrate on my studies.
I actually agree the latter but nowadays I'm getting lonely and want to make a boyfriend and spend to happy 2010.
>>I actually agree on the latter but nowadays I’m getting lonely and I want to have a boyfriend and spend 2010 happily.
I want to enjoy a sweet date.
>> I want to enjoy a romantic date.
However,I can't do that easily because the test is coming fast and my parents are really expecting that day and I don't want to dissapoint them.
>>However, I can not do that because my test is coming fast and my parents are really expecting much from me and I don’t want to disappoint them.
I also want to receive praises from people.
>> Correct.
To be honest,I'm always ready for falling in love but the most important thing is I can't find someone who really like me.
>>To be honest, I am always ready to fall in love but the most important thing is that I can’t find someone who really likes me.
Oh~it's the gloomy day.
>>Oh! It’s a gloomy day!
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