The disadvantages of wearing make-up
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Wearing make-up is hard work.
Because, we must remove make-up after work or date. It\'s very bothersome works.
Otherwise, the trouble will make for our skin
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Wearing make-up is hard work. Because, we must remove make-up after work or date.
>> Putting make-up requires hard work. At the end of the day, we will just remove them.
It\'s very bothersome works.
>> It\'s really bothersome.
Otherwise, the trouble will make for our skin
>> Otherwise, If we won\'t remove them, they can cause something bad to our skin.
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