The Disobedient Frog
학생이 쓴 원문
The Young frog lives in a large pond with his mother!
But young frog is very rude and bad!!
One day, His mother teaches "Kaegul"sounds to him.
But young frog says "Gulkae!! Gulkae!!"!!
She teaches "Kaegul" to him again! But also, he says "Gulkae!"
She is very angry. He is very fun.
The other day, his mother gets ill and died,,
The Young frog is very sad and sorry to her.
He cries next to the tomb. And He examines himself!!!
I will not make her angry all day! And I don't become like this the dull young frog!!
강사 첨삭
Hi Sarah! I\'m sorry, I didn\'t notice that you already made your composition before our class. Anyway, thank you for sharing your story with me. This will teach children to be respectful to their parents. Thank you Sarah. I hope you will enjoy tomorrow. I can\'t wait to see you on Friday. Take care, cheerios!
teacher GRACE
The Young frog lives in a large pond with his mother!
>> The young frog lived in a big pond with his mother.But young frog is very rude and bad!!
>> The young frog was very rude and bad.One day, His mother teaches \"Kaegul\"sounds to him.
>> One day, his mother taught him Kaegul sounds.But young frog says \"Gulkae!! Gulkae!!\"!!
>> But the young frog said \'Gulkae! Gulkae!\'She teaches \"Kaegul\" to him again! But also, he says \"Gulkae!\"
>> The mother tried again yet the young frog only responded with \'Gulkae!\'She is very angry. He is very fun.
>> The mother was so angry and the frog was so happy.The other day, his mother gets ill and died,,
>> One day, his mother became ill and died.The Young frog is very sad and sorry to her.
>>The young frog was very sad and felt sorry to his mother.He cries next to the tomb. And He examines himself!!!
>> He cried on his mother\'s tomb while he examined himself.I will not make her angry all day! And I don\'t become like this the dull young frog!!
>> He promised that he will not make his mother angry again because he doesn\'t want to be a dull and bad frog anymore.
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