The duty of Parents
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Unless Something special occation,The duty of Parents has expired after children are older than 20. It seems to be weird if parents keep going to have their duty of grown children.But Instead Parents should teach their children about their manner which is the most important thing in relationship utill they are grown up. As the children is the copy of parents, we can anticipate the house studying by just looking of their children.
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Hi John!
This is a great statement of facts.
Make sure to be careful of capitalization.
You also need to focus on the proper use and positions of modifiers.
Look at the corrections below.
Ask me if you have any questions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Unless Something special occation,The duty of Parents has expired after children are older than 20. >> Except in special cases, the duty of parents ends when their children turn 20.
It seems to be weird if parents keep going to have their duty of grown children.
>> It would seem weird if parents keep supporting grown children.
But Instead Parents should teach their children about their manner which is the most important thing in relationship utill they are grown up.
>> Parents should instead teach their children about manners which is the most important thing in adult relationships.
As the children is the copy of parents, we can anticipate the house studying by just looking of their children.
>> As the children are a reflection of their parents, we can tell what kinds of homes these children grew up in.
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