The economy is always a significant concern. How is the Korean economy doing at the moment? Do you t
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Recent economy of Korea is getting worse. because incresing of China economy and low birth rate.
It looks like stop of economy.
I can\'t expect any improve future right now.
Korea should increase new technology.
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Recent economy of Korea is getting worse. because incresing of China economy and low birth rate.
>> The recent economy of Korea is getting worse due to the rise of China’s economy and the low birth rate.
It looks like stop of economy.
>> It feels like the economy has come to a halt.
I can\'t expect any improve future right now.
>> Right now, I can\'t expect any improvement in the near future.
Korea should increase new technology.
>> Korea should focus on developing new technology.
>> The recent economy of Korea is getting worse due to the rise of China’s economy and the low birth rate.
It looks like stop of economy.
>> It feels like the economy has come to a halt.
I can\'t expect any improve future right now.
>> Right now, I can\'t expect any improvement in the near future.
Korea should increase new technology.
>> Korea should focus on developing new technology.
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