The effect of ads
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Just as most of people buy advertised products, I am also affected by some ads when purchasing some goods. Especially when I want to have some products I don\'t know well such as technical items or medications. However, I try not to be dependent from ads. I try not to trust ads blindly. If I see some advertised goods and they seem to be excellent, I always check the goods on Internet. I check reviews whether they are positive or negative. And then I ask for some advice from my family and friends.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I agree with you. I also don\'t follow ads blindly, but sometimes, it\'s very tempting to do so. I do the same—I search online and check reviews before buying, especially if it\'s an expensive item.
- T. Caitlyn
Just as most of people buy advertised products, I am also affected by some ads when purchasing some goods.
>> Just like most people, I am also influenced by some ads when purchasing goods
Especially when I want to have some products I don\'t know well such as technical items or medications.
>> Especially when I want to purchase products I\'m not familiar with, such as technical items or medications.
However, I try not to be dependent from ads.
>> However, I try not to be dependent on ads.
I try not to trust ads blindly.
>> CORRECT
If I see some advertised goods and they seem to be excellent, I always check the goods on Internet.
>> If I come across advertised goods that seem excellent, I always check them on the Internet.
I check reviews whether they are positive or negative. And then I ask for some advice from my family and friends.
>> CORRECT
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