The elves and shoemaker

Shoemaker's family is very pour. And people don't buy their shoes. One day, shoemaker and his wife go to sleep, the elves make shoes. They know his faithful and kindness. Next day, Many people buy their shoes. They feel good~! But they don't know who makes them. In the evening, they wait for them and they show that elves makes shoes. He and she makes elves clothes because of their thanks. And the elves like their clothes! They are very happy~^^ I wish smart elves~! I want to they give many knowledge to me! I envy them^^

Hello there Sarah!Wow!You chose a very interesting story to share to me. :p I\'ve read about this story when I was in High School. :p It\'s been a long time. Thank you for reminding me about these kinds of stories. :p It\'s really nice to reminisce. :p Anyway, please check out the corrections below!I\'ll see you later in class. :p ~~T. Heidi _^-^_ Shoemaker\'s family is very pour. >>>The shoemaker\'s family is very poor.And people don\'t buy their shoes. >>>Correct!One day, shoemaker and his wife go to sleep, the elves make shoes.>>>One day, when the shoemaker and his wife went to sleep, the elves made shoes. They know his faithful and kindness. >>>They know that he is faithful and kind. >>>Or: They know about his faitfulness and kindness.Next day, Many people buy their shoes. >>>The next day, many people bought their shoes.They feel good~! >>>Correct!But they don\'t know who makes them. >>>Correct!In the evening, they wait for them and they show that elves makes shoes. >>>Later that evening, they waited for them and they saw the elves who are making the shoes.He and she makes elves clothes because of their thanks. >>>The couple made clothes in order for them to show their appreciation. And the elves like their clothes! >>>Correct!They are very happy~^^ >>>Correct!I wish smart elves~! >>>I wish I\'m as smart as the elves!I want to they give many knowledge to me! >>>I want them to give me a lot of knowledge.I envy them^^ >>>Correct!