The environmental problem
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Hello, [이름]!
Good evening.
Thank you for submitting your answer about the homework question that I gave last time.
I totally agree with your opinion that these environmental issues should be solved in a global scale since we are all connected since we\'re all living in one planet. ^^
By the way the last sentence you wrote seems incomplete so I just ended the thought about all countries being connected to each other.
I hope that you\'re feeling better today since you felt that some fine dust went in your throat yesterday.
Always take care and I hope to speak to you tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Gina
I think that the environment problem such as find dust, pollution and global warning should be solved on global scale.
This is because these environmental issues are not about just one or two nation. All countries are connected and cannot
>> I think that environmental problems such as fine dust, pollution and global warming should be solved in a global scale.
That is because these environmental issues are not just about one or two nations. All countries are connected to each other.
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