The episode last week was..

2011-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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Do you remember the program about the four couples I told you ? The episode last week was that they mentioned their childhood. Although they have lived for from three years to five years together, they had a hard time to tell their past. As you know, they used to be bizarre couples. Just because someone has shameful childhood, it dosen't mean he or she definitely becomes a bad person. But I can somewhat understand the reason of their actions or responses they did. Also they seemed to understand each other like me after listening to. I think the best thing is the little husband's smile. I have never seen his smile except that he felt ashamed. It was a happy smile recently. Two weeks left by their dance competition. I look forward to seeing their changes.

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Hi [이름]! Thanks for giving me an update about these couples. Haha! -Tiny^0^ Do you remember the program about the four couples I told you ? >>correctThe episode last week was that they mentioned their childhood. >>correctAlthough they have lived for from three years to five years together, they had a hard time to tell their past. >> Although they have lived for three years to five years together, they had a hard time to tell their past. As you know, they used to be bizarre couples. >>correctJust because someone has shameful childhood, it dosen't mean he or she definitely becomes a bad person. >> Just because someone has shameful childhood, it doesn’t mean he or she definitely becomes a bad person. >>Just a spelling check: doesn’tBut I can somewhat understand the reason of their actions or responses they did. >>correctAlso they seemed to understand each other like me after listening to. >> They also seemed to understand each other like me after listening. >>(listening to what?  I think it is incomplete.^-^) I think the best thing is the little husband's smile. >>correctI have never seen his smile except that he felt ashamed. >>correctIt was a happy smile recently. >>correctTwo weeks left by their dance competition. >> There are two weeks left before their dance competition. I look forward to seeing their changes. >>correct

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