The episode last week was..
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you remember the program about the four couples I told you ?
The episode last week was that they mentioned their childhood.
Although they have lived for from three years to five years together, they had a hard time to tell their past.
As you know, they used to be bizarre couples.
Just because someone has shameful childhood, it dosen't mean he or she definitely becomes a bad person.
But I can somewhat understand the reason of their actions or responses they did.
Also they seemed to understand each other like me after listening to.
I think the best thing is the little husband's smile.
I have never seen his smile except that he felt ashamed.
It was a happy smile recently.
Two weeks left by their dance competition.
I look forward to seeing their changes.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for giving me an update about these couples.
Haha!
-Tiny^0^
Do you remember the program about the four couples I told you ?
>>correctThe episode last week was that they mentioned their childhood.
>>correctAlthough they have lived for from three years to five years together, they had a hard time to tell their past.
>> Although they have lived for three years to five years together, they had a hard time to tell their past.
As you know, they used to be bizarre couples.
>>correctJust because someone has shameful childhood, it dosen't mean he or she definitely becomes a bad person.
>> Just because someone has shameful childhood, it doesn’t mean he or she definitely becomes a bad person.
>>Just a spelling check: doesn’tBut I can somewhat understand the reason of their actions or responses they did.
>>correctAlso they seemed to understand each other like me after listening to.
>> They also seemed to understand each other like me after listening.
>>(listening to what? I think it is incomplete.^-^)
I think the best thing is the little husband's smile.
>>correctI have never seen his smile except that he felt ashamed.
>>correctIt was a happy smile recently.
>>correctTwo weeks left by their dance competition.
>> There are two weeks left before their dance competition.
I look forward to seeing their changes.
>>correct
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