The eradication
학생이 쓴 원문
I think some Korean churches are corrupted. Among various kinds of corruption, the corrupt relationship with political groups is the most severe. Even though religion and politics are separate and independent each other, they have had black alliances for their own goals. Some churches give bribes to a party with their followers\' offerings. The party receives the bribes and protects the churches. I think the corrupt relationship should be eradicated and being independent of politics is to have real freedom of religion.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I agree with you that eradicating corrupt relationships between the government and churches is a way to be truly free. Also, this can help deal with churches that abuse their members by collecting too much money or asking them to do things against their will.
- T. Caitlyn
I think some Korean churches are corrupted.
>> I think some Korean churches are corrupt.
Among various kinds of corruption, the corrupt relationship with political groups is the most severe.
>> CORRECT
Even though religion and politics are separate and independent each other, they have had black alliances for their own goals.
>> Even though religion and politics are separate and independent from each other, they have had secret alliances for their own goals.
Some churches give bribes to a party with their followers\' offerings.
>> CORRECT
The party receives the bribes and protects the churches.
>> CORRECT
I think the corrupt relationship should be eradicated and being independent of politics is to have real freedom of religion.
>> I think the corrupt relationship should be eradicated, and being independent of politics is necessary to have real freedom of religion.
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