The essay in the coversation with urgent message
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First, I feel embarrassed with this situation.
>> In this situation, I would feel uncomfortable approaching her.
However it is important to forward the message to my manager,so I will write the memo and send to the her desk
>>However, since it is important I still need to send her the message. So, I would just write the memo on a piece of paper and leave it on her desk.
I think that the way is to jump in the conversation without any interruption of the conversation.
>>I think that is the best approach for me to deliver the message without interrupting her.
Upon hanging up the phone, I will tell her with detail.
>>After she hangs up the phone, I will provide her with the details.
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