The essence of celebrating

On "Memorial day", we should mourn the soldiers who had died a glorious death on the battlefield. On this day, we should hoist the national flag at half-mast. Because the memorial day is the date that we express our sorrow. But many people may not know about the mean of the day. I think people just know the day, "Off day". From now on, we will have to know and remember the essence of celebrating about the day, "Memorial day".

Hi there [이름]^^   How was your Memorial Day?^^ It is true that some people just think of the Holidays as a day to have a break from school or work. A lot of people forget the essence or importance of celebrating a special day. You have great ideas and yes I strongly agree with you.^^   Check a few of my corrections^^   Take care^^T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you:   On \"Memorial day\", we should mourn the soldiers who had died a glorious death on the battlefield. >> CORRECT OR> We commemorate the death of the soldiers that passed away during the war.On this day, we should hoist the national flag at half-mast. >> CORRECT OR> For this Day, we must put up the national flag half-way on their poles.Because the memorial day is the date that we express our sorrow. >> CORRECT OR> Memorial day is the day that our sorrow is expressed.But many people may not know about the mean of the day. >> But many people may not know about the meaning of the day.I think people just know the day, \"Off day\". >> I think people just know the day, \"Day off\".From now on, we will have to know and remember the essence of celebrating about the day, \"Memorial day\". >> From now on, we have to know and remember the essence of celebrating the Holiday, \"Memorial day\".