The estimate mail sent to the foreign company

2012-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I am the researcher of the company located in South Korea called JMC. I would like to receive the estimate about the Rapid Solidification among your product of company. We would like to make the ribbon of the width 1.5mm and thickness 0.02mm. It is possible? And, Is your company able to make the wheel size over 500mm? If there are any questions, please give me the mail. I will wait for a reply. Thank you.

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Hi there Sir [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! Here are the corrections I made for you. Please be guided. Take care and have a nice day! Cant wait to talk to you again..:) xoxoT. Camille^^ I am the researcher of the company located in South Korea called JMC. >> Correct I would like to receive the estimate about the Rapid Solidification among your product of company. >> I would like to receive an estimate of your product, Rapid Solidification.  We would like to make the ribbon of the width 1.5mm and thickness 0.02mm. >> We would like to make the width of the ribbon 1.5 mm and the thickness 0.2 mm.It is possible?>> Correct And, is your company able to make the wheel size over 500mm?>> Correct If there are any questions, please give me the mail. >> If there is any question, please send me an e-mail. I will wait for a reply.>> Correct Thank you. >> Correct

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