The expectations of living in Japan
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The first expectation of living in japan is, Japan has same living styles with me. I want to focus in my life just like my hobbies and works. A lot of Japanese have
hobbies that made them happy and they don’t care about politic problem too much. These things are same with me, so I feel comfortable in japan.
The second is the a variety of nature. Japan have a big territory. Especially the length of north to south is very long. Therefore, Hokkaido, top of japan, and Okinawa, bottom of japan have completely different climate and nature. Because I’m living in Japan, I can enjoy these nature every time.
The third is food. I like Japanese traditional food just like Sushi, Sasimi and Shabushabu etc. In addition, Japan has lots of creative cuisines that can feel chef’s character. When I eat these food I’m full of happiness.
I have a lot of expectations of living in Japan. I’m satisfied my life in Japan and always thank to people around me.
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- Tricia
The first expectation of living in japan is, Japan has same living styles with me.
>> My first expectation of living in Japan is it has the same life style with Korea.
I want to focus in my life just like my hobbies and works.
>> I want to focus in my life at the same time with my hobbies and work.
A lot of Japanese have
hobbies that made them happy and they don’t care about politic problem too much.
hobbies that made them happy and they don’t care about politic problem too much.
>> A lot of Japanese have hobbies that make them happy and they don’t care about political problems too much.
These things are same with me, so I feel comfortable in Japan.
>> These things are similar to what I want, so I feel comfortable living here in Japan.
The second is the a variety of nature. Japan have a big territory.
>> Secondly, it has varieties of nature here. Japan has a big territory.
Especially the length of north to south is very long.
>> Especially, the distance between North and South is really long.
Therefore, Hokkaido, top of japan, and Okinawa, bottom of japan have completely different climate and nature.
>> Hokkaido is a city on top of Japan, while Okinawa is at the bottom, and they have a lot of differences when it comes to climate and nature.
Because I’m living in Japan, I can enjoy these nature every time.
>> Living here in Japan makes me enjoy its nature.
The third is food. I like Japanese traditional food just like Sushi, Sasimi and Shabushabu etc.
>> Thirdly, I like Japanese traditional foods such as Sushi, Sasimi and Shabu-shabu, etc.
In addition, Japan has lots of creative cuisines that can feel chef’s character.
>> In addition, Japan has lots of creative cuisines that showcase the chef\'s character.
When I eat these food I’m full of happiness.
>> Whenever I eat these foods, I feel full with happiness.
I have a lot of expectations of living in Japan.
>> I have a lot of expectations when it comes to living here in Japan.
I’m satisfied my life in Japan and always thank to people around me.
>> I’m satisfied with my life here in Japan and I am always thankful for the people around me.
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