The factor that makes travel interesting is-
학생이 쓴 원문
The factor that makes travel interesting is the difference. Even domestic travel will be new because each region has different characteristics. Traveling abroad is different, so it will be interesting to see. People find common ground in differences and enjoy differences. People travel to experience new feelings.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The factor that makes travel interesting is the difference.
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Even domestic travel will be new because each region has different characteristics.
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Traveling abroad is different, so it will be interesting to see.
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People find common ground in differences and enjoy differences.
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People travel to experience new feelings.
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