The fads I know.
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In 2002, when I was 3, Korea had the greatest score in Worldcup ever. We called the players as red devils and I remember that everybody wore red shirts. My family, my friends, and also I wore that red shirts and that’s the fad that I experienced at first. Recently, in Korea, floppy hairband is a fad though, I do not have one.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T.Gabby :)
In 2002, when I was 3, Korea had the greatest score in Worldcup ever.
>> Correct.
We called the players as red devils and I remember that everybody wore red shirts.
>> Correct.
My family, my friends, and also I wore that red shirts and that’s the fad that I experienced at first.
>> My family, my friends, and I also wore that red shirts and that’s the fad that I experienced at first.
Recently, in Korea, floppy hairband is a fad though, I do not have one.
>> Correct.
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