The famous protest
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I have seen many protests in my life. Among them, I remember several protests such as the protest against the long-term rule and dictatorship in 1970s, the laborors\' demonstration against the bad working condition in 1979, the strong protest against the illegal cadet and takeover of the regime by the military leaders in 1980, the nationwide demo asking for direct presidential elections in 1987,the impeachment movement of the woman president in 2016, and the same movement now.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework! Wow! I can really see that you\'ve witnessed the history of the Korean government. I don\'t know if that\'s a good thing or not, but hopefully, these protests are reminders to you that Korean citizens are willing to fight against injustice for your country.
- T. Caitlyn
I have seen many protests in my life.
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Among them, I remember several protests such as the protest against the long-term rule and dictatorship in 1970s.
>> Among them, I remember several protests, such as the protest against the long-term rule and dictatorship in the 1970s,
the laborors\' demonstration against the bad working conditions in 1979,
>> CORRECT
the strong protest against the illegal cadet and takeover of the regime by the military leaders in 1980,
>> the strong protest against the illegal coup and takeover of the regime by military leaders in 1980,
the nationwide demo asking for direct presidential elections in 1987,
>> CORRECT
the impeachment movement of the woman president in 2016,
>> the impeachment movement of the female president in 2016,
and the same movement now.
>> CORRECT
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