The fatal encounter(2014)

2018-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

this movie is about king of the joseon dynasty. i think that this movie has a quiet, calm atmosphere. so, diverse actors and actresses's performance is being emphasized. at the begining of the throne, jeongjo king had many enemies. enemies wanted to kill the king. but, jeongjo king was really smart person. he had waited for the right time, and jeongjo king defeated his enemies and regained the throne. his patience stood out. the reason why i remember this movie for a long time is the words that jeongjo king said at the finish. the words are as follows. Do my best not ignoring small thing. As I do my best on small thing, it can be completed If it is completed, it expresses itself If it is expressed, it exposes outside If it is exposed, it can bring to light. If it is identified, it makes someone impressed, If it is impressing, someone can be changed, If someone is changed, He can grow up.

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this movie is about king of the joseon dynasty.

>> This movie is about a king of the Jeoson dynasty.
 i think that this movie has a quiet, calm atmosphere. so, diverse actors and actresses\'s performance is being emphasized.
>> I think that this movie has a quiet, and calm atmosphere. So, diverse actors and actresses\' performance have been emphasized.
at the begining of the throne, jeongjo king had many enemies. enemies wanted to kill the king. but, jeongjo king was really smart person. he had waited for the right time, and jeongjo king defeated his enemies and regained the throne. his patience stood out.
>> At the beginning of his reign, King Jeongjo had many enemies that wanted to kill him. But King Jeongjo was a really smart person. He waited for the right time, and defeated his enemies and regained the throne, His patience stood out.
the reason why i remember this movie for a long time is the words that jeongjo king said at the finish. the words are as follows.
>> The reason I remember this movie for a long time is the words that King Jeongjo said at the end. The words are as follows:
Do my best not ignoring small thing.
As I do my best on small thing, it can be completed
If it is completed, it expresses itself
If it is expressed, it exposes outside
If it is exposed, it can bring to light.

If it is identified, it makes someone impressed,
If it is impressing, someone can be changed,
If someone is changed, He can grow up.

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